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Okay, then. Shall we take a look?




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Many Korean parents these days send their children off to English camps in the U.K.


Please tell us your opinion about this trend. (2014³â Çö´ë¸ðºñ½º 2Â÷¸éÁ¢ Áú¹®)





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English camps in the U.K. .... well ...


I think it's not a bad idea considering how bad Korean education system really is.


The majority of Korean people learn how to speak English by reading textbooks


or by studying major English tests like TOEFL or OPIc that 


doesn't fully represent how fluent they are in speaking English.


I am sure most parents would want their kids to speak English well


since it's very important these days to have global perspective.


So if Korean students can't really study English in Korea and 


if their parents are unsatisfied with how their education system


train their kids to speak the language, 


then they have the right to send their kids to the camps.


So, overall, I think this is a great idea.




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